White dented skin,
marked with careful precision
of
accidental wounds.
I look over my shoulder
instead of looking at your face
and it makes it all glamorous
and justifying,
as if I was posing
for that perfect picture.
Your salty fingers
end up invading my mouth,
stopping me
from screaming out the truth,
so what you get
are forced, silent lies.
Deaf
to the sound of ill-coloured heart
and blind
to the pale indifference we both share,
we let our exhaled breaths float
in the night around us.
I strike you as cold,
but it’s just that
I don’t like crying
over spilled milk.
– Chatty Owl –

Quite superb.
Very happy you connected with AnElephant.
Likewise đŸ™‚
I’m surrounded by silence, except for your voice. I’m happy.
Ditto….
goddammit!!
Good way, i hope đŸ˜‰
In A Very Good Way Huh!! đŸ˜€
closeness
has never sounded so
disconnected
~
dial tone
Sigh..
You have a beautiful, mysterious writing voice, my friend.
Thank you once again..
“Your salty fingers…end up invading my mouth,…stopping me…from screaming out the truth…”
Very nice đŸ™‚
Thanks… You know me, everything is a bit… Twisted haha
Twisted like tea :p
I dont drink tea đŸ™‚
Woo, finally catching up. Great poem Chatty! Really appreciate the work you put into this. (I’ve missed your poems). đŸ™‚
Thanks dearest! Always makes me smile to see you liking my gibberish đŸ™‚
Your lines shatter. Drawing everyone’s attention. I enjoy witnessing your thoughts dance through your poetry. Thank you.
Thats such a beautiful comment. Thank you so much. Words shatter and lines stagger across my paths, making poetry flow effortlessly for me..
Beyond talented. Every single word
Thanks! Not sure about “talent”, but at least I enjoy it!
Ohhhh hush đŸ˜›
Ok haha
Your eloquent words, say so much..
It flows from within..
Hi, I nominated you for the Liebster Blog Award. Take care, hugs.
Hey! Thanks! Flattered.. But I have stopped doing awards, way too many around to keep up with all of them. But honestly, thanks so much for thinking about me..
Girl, you are pure talent. Love it!
Thats quite a statement! Thanks dollface!
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You have such a way of writing in a musical pattern… Have you ever considered recording your poems?
Thank you so much. Yes, I did think about that, actually. But somehow everybody on WP started doing that and I got hesitant.. Maybe I should reconsider, huh?
Thanks so much for a beautiful comment! (Also, will reply about collaboration asap)
“I look over my shoulder
instead of looking at your face
and it makes it all glamorous
and justifying,
as if I was posing
for that perfect picture.”
Really good! I like it. Ending is charming.
P.S.
I once told you that you should publish your poems!
Funny, this bit was my favourite too, glad you picked that and it stood out for you too đŸ™‚
Publishing? In process đŸ˜‰
even deaf, dumb and blind, you communicate one helluva poem
Ha! Thanks! You do compliments well đŸ˜‰
It is one of the perfect pieces by you! đŸ™‚
Thats quite a statement! Thank you! Surprised and flattered that you found time to stop and read đŸ™‚
Lolzz.. know that I’m always reading you even when I am not leaving comments. I always love your poems. xoxo
Do you really?! Sneaky lol thanks though, Im always around your blog myself!
Milk is not worth crying over. Even beer is not đŸ™‚
Very true. đŸ™‚