You found me naked
moments after I didn’t want to
be discovered,
yet
I still let you watch me
while I was watching you(r)
reaction.
Exposed skin
became less and less visible
by the soundless noise of the soft cashmere
that suddenly covered my arms.
Dark cotton slid on my skin
flawlessly
as
the colour of my pale milky legs
got replaced by denim.
Glimpses of the bare flesh
got exchanged for fabric
and
your surprised expression
got exchanged for mutual attraction.
Buzzing in the air.
I watched you watching me
getting dressed
and you could barely control your excitement
and the urge
to rip my clothes
back off.
Even though you heard
my mind screaming “no”
in reply,
we both knew
that all you had to do
is say one word
to make it all happen.
I make pretty words
sound filthy
and you tame wild girls
to act oh-so-obedient.
– Chatty Owl –
CHATTYOWL 
remembering falling
under hoofs
~
stampeding
pulses
trampling
sense of time
place
emotion
Reading your words reminds me why i feel so good writing.
omg! ONE MELTS JUST READING THIS!
*blush*
melodic, fluid and graceful. thank you for sharing your sweet verse with me. tony
Its an absolute pleasure to see that others enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoy writing it 🙂
Intimately beautiful, as always. 🙂
Thanks dear..
Left me with a racing heart. Excellent.
Now I need a cold shower! The images your words elicit are … To put it mildly, oh so lovely and very delicious 😉
Glad that delicious it was..
Hello lovely, I’ve nominated you for the Sunshine Award http://sistasertraline.wordpress.com/2013/04/25/good-day-sunshine/ enjoy 😉
Hey! Thanks so much for this. Makes me smile to see that people remember me. But I stopped doing awards, though. Either way, thanks so very much!
No problem honey! X
I didn’t NOT like it but there’s missing the mystery, the excitement of shades, shadows and yet, you knotted it in a blend of satin and silk!
I guess there was no mystery in this one, thats true. But maybe none was needed? Who knows.
Very nice, m’ lady…provocation of the senses done in reverse…and done quite effectively, I might add 🙂
Oh why, thanks so much!
Beautifully written. I don’t think I need to say any more.
Thank you so much.
that’s a lucky man
🙂 ha. Thanks
Sweet, sexy fun, beautiful.
Thanks!
Pleasure.
strong “vivid imaginations”
Always been blessed with that. So called talent then maybe?
bien sur
“we both knew
that all you had to do
is say one word
to make it all happen.”
I would have to say this part was my favorite – but an exquisite write — all around… much enjoyed! 🙂
Thanks Robyn! Nice to see you in my playground 🙂 haha
😊always my pleasure !!
I like it a lot.
I can´t say which part is my favorite — but I´ll try to go with last part!
Thanks so much! And im glad you liked the ending – i always aim to make it memorable.
🙂
An exquisite write…
Delicious
Thank you.
Mind wanders and wonders about the single but powerful word… To direct and have control over the wild… He must know how to look past both fabric and flesh, as neither adequately cover carnal urges of desire… Where untamed play.
Absolutely.. Its all about control. Both mind and body 😉
Have you thought about what that word would be?
Indeed I have… 😉
🙂
Bravo!!! Encore!!! I read this three times, and each time it got just a little bit better… 🙂
Wow! Thats a big compliment coming from you.
You my friend are too kind… 🙂 I love your writing!
Never too kind, just honest.
You made my day 🙂 🙂
Soft sensual…sensational ❤
Three s’s… 🙂
I can think of more in regards to you…
…
Beautiful poem, delicately erotic like the skin of a lady
Thank you.. Glad you thought so.
Whoa. I should not have read that at work. I now need a lie down and a cool drink… exquisite as always
Breathe! 😉
Wonderfully erotic, silkenly soft and beautifully written.
B.
Thank you… Glad you sensed the softness intended.