Eyes. Closed.
Mouth. Not.
Neither are legs.
Hands. Locked.
Together with yours.
Above us.
Smells. Intensified.
Movements. Quicker.
Than the heart rate.
Lover-like. Affairs.
Animal-like. Actions.
Us. Lusting.
Over each other.
With no. Happy end.
To finish off. With.
"Owls are not what they seem"
CHATTYOWL 
This is fantastic. The quick jump to the next word. Painting a picture with barely saying anything at all. Very hot and sensual catching the very essence of this type of encounter. I love this.
Im so glad you like this! It is slightly different for me, so I wasn’t too sure. Your positive feedback makes me smile 🙂 thanks dear.
I know and the difference is very noticeable but you pull it off so well. It is a fantastic piece of art and it seemed so effortlessly done. I think you should experiment more with this, for sure! 🙂 and you are well deserved of the positive! 🙂
Interesting writing style which I’ve not seen from you before (or maybe I haven’t read enough of you yet). Very enjoyable.
Yes, it was new for me. Just wanted to try something different. Glad you approve…
Great poem, Owl. I happen to be someone who loves this kind of staccato effect. Well-done!
Thanks! That makes me proud!
Great poem. I really love the pace of this poem, really well done!
Thanks you! Glad you did..
OUCH! Not nice – i always try for a happy ‘ending’! (or a couple even?) 😉
Hehe, isnt that great to know? 🙂
Finish. Overrated Begin. Again
Yes. Please.
Yum..that is all
I fell asleep at the end…
Huh.