This is one more collaboration with the sweet Neeraj. Enjoy!
Dew drops from your trembling lips,
I pick one by one as I kiss
to rub all over your face.
“Suck my kiss”.
“Squeeze my lips”, you beg.
“Make my lipstick melt away.”
Unhook your clothes.
Undress yourself.
Leave nothing, as they slip away
from your skin.
Tell me everything.
Tell me, how does it feel
to be craved in such a distance?
Smudged lipstick
leaves marks on my flipped palm
same way
your words leave an imprint
in my mind.
Brush your skin
against my naked bones
and
whisper to me,
if you like the taste of my hipbones.
Feel me running my hands
all over your wet skin.
Feel it
as I’m embracing you,
like a hot water swathe.
Feel my tongue
all over you neck,
inhaling your aroma
as our hearts race.
As my face goes
in between your thighs,
don’t stop
with your seducing voice.
Hold tight,
when I swirl my tongue,
let the pleasure arise
as we progress towards the heights.
Tell me if it doesn’t suffice.
Open your eyes,
hurry up slowly.
Your skin is burned with words exchanged,
your blood is hot,
the colour of my cherry lips,
that whisper sentences of distant passion –
into nothing.
An empty room.
The sound of disconnected phone call,
ringing in our ears.
Beautiful and inspirational! Like all your posts recently. Serioulsly I wish I could write verse like you.
This is such a beautiful comment, thank you very much. Don’t write yourself off though 😉
real or reel but it made me real for me..nicely experienced!
Thanks!!
Superb Collaboration
Thank you dear, glad you thought so.
You’ve been quiet lately. I know you are not asleep.
I’m not sleeping. It’s because I’m dead.
You do have a ghostness to you! But like all things… this too shall pass.
And so it did. Back to normal show now.
Very nice.
Thanks once again 🙂
*sigh* Great emotion. Makes us hacks want to write poetry too.(never happen)
I think you should definitely give it a go.
What can I say that hadn’t been told ? I’m jealous …
Oh dear.. Dont be..
well what’s not to Like? tony
🙂
What a powerful, soulful collaboration. Well done!
blush
Sorry:)
certainly no need, owl – apology is anathema to honest art – I likewise try to give it honest reaction
Then im flattered and very happy.
This is where the other children (like me) say “Can I play too?”
Only if you play nicely.
Wonderful collab! Flowed well to the point you couldn’t tell two different people had written it. ^_^
Awww thanks hun.
I really had an amazing experience while writing with you 😀
Ditto!
🙂
Such an amazing collaboration… Leaves me hanging in the images of the combination of words and thoughts… Bravo!!!
Thanks so much, my dear!
Very vivid write, very sensualy rhytmic, I liked it!
Thanks dollface!
Um…. *swoon* *melts* *exploded*
That is all
A stunning poem, you two obviously work very well together! More! More! 🙂
Awww thanks