Dirty taste of wet water.
Don’t remember all the sins I committed,
but
I still dip my toes and run my fingertips
in a shamefully disguised surprise
about
how sinister my past is.
You used to pull my hair
as I pulled myself up from my knees –
the electricity was so buzzing
between us,
that our bodies lost connection
and died
electrocuted
by each other’s sin.
– Chatty Owl –
CHATTYOWL 
fingers leaving trails of sparks on skin,
not unlike this poem.
Very interesting poem and the end ………… Just wow! You are good.
Thanks so much, Audrina! Its really nice to see you stopping by!
SO good, I’ve been in that place…
Thanks dear…. You know, probably thats why we like each other’s writings!
Most definitely!
fusion is amazing !
Every time i see your avatar pop in on my screen, i get so excited and happy. I think you have a brilliant talent and to receive any feedback from you is an honour. Thank you so much, my dear.
Friend I just nominated you for 3 awards, check my blog. Faithfully Deborah
Hi darling. Sorry for a belated response. Thank you do much for thinking about me, it is always an honour to hear that people appreciate what I write. Please know that the feeling is absolutely mutual!
I have stopped doing awards though, but I’m honestly very flattered of your acknowledgment of my works..
This is so powerful!
It says such a lot about passion and its place in a relationship.
She wants a master
but he lives so far away
poor, little lost girl
How far?
This Is The SHIT. Excuse My French! 🙂
This kind of french is perfectly acceptable here haha!
Hahaha. Then French It Is! LOL
Make the Eiffel tower sing.
Wow, the end is stunning.
And this is coming from you?! Thanks a lot.
I really like this one. Maybe I’m morbid. Thanks Chatty, great work (as usual)!
Nothing morbid about it. Im glad you like it, my dear! Really do!
There’s no better saint than penitent sinner. If it is not against law then it is not sin though 🙂
I sometimes wonder do those sinners really feel THAT guilty?
What a painful way to lose someone…
“electrocuted by each others sin.” Perfect ending… I really like your writing style
Thanks so much, means a lot!
So electrified with sexuality, this poem is!
Nice!
Thanks!!!! Just scribbled morning thoughts 😉