Dirty taste of wet water.
Don’t remember all the sins I committed,
I still dip my toes and run my fingertips
in a shamefully disguised surprise
how sinister my past is.
You used to pull my hair
as I pulled myself up from my knees –
the electricity was so buzzing
between us,
that our bodies lost connection
and died
by each other’s sin.

– Chatty Owl –

28 Replies to “REMINISCING”

    1. Every time i see your avatar pop in on my screen, i get so excited and happy. I think you have a brilliant talent and to receive any feedback from you is an honour. Thank you so much, my dear.

    2. Hi darling. Sorry for a belated response. Thank you do much for thinking about me, it is always an honour to hear that people appreciate what I write. Please know that the feeling is absolutely mutual!
      I have stopped doing awards though, but I’m honestly very flattered of your acknowledgment of my works..

  1. There’s no better saint than penitent sinner. If it is not against law then it is not sin though 🙂

  2. “electrocuted by each others sin.” Perfect ending… I really like your writing style

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