Faint smell,
lingering on my fingers
is a constant reminder
of
those flawless hugs,
tongue-tied sentences
and
over-exposed film
that you used
on me
the night before.
It was black-cat-dark
and so softly purring
when
I came
(to you),
like a moon-child chasing paper
as I tried to stay
untraced
under your skin,
leaving you guilt and memory free
of us,
except I failed
and left
long black hair
scattered on your floor
while
every single carpet burn
now
means
that you cannot forget me.
Try?
– Chatty Owl –
CHATTYOWL 
You are very talented and write with such passion… Love it!
Once again, thank you so much for your words!
Wonderful. I now must follow your blog!!
Thanks so much! All your kind compliments mean a lot to me, much appreciated. Im glad you thought my words were worthy reading!
Try? To forget you? Ummmm …
…. no.
Im glad then..
Picturesque!! 🙂
Times Five. Hmmm…
2 hands, 2 knees…. um… forehead?? 🙂
Ha ha, yes! 😉
Always leaving a lasting impression one can never forget. Try as they might.
So glad it gives you those emotions, dear 🙂
And finally caught up on my reader. Love your work! 😀
Thanks mister! I promise i’ll catch up with you too!
Captivating, so beautifully descriptive. Unforgettable.
Flattered..
AMAZING! One of my favs 🙂
Really? Surprised, but i guess i can see why you would like, missy! 😉
This is beautiful, Chatty! So vividly conveyed in simple but heartbreakingly emotionally drenched words. Your work always inspire me!
Thats what i always long to hear – others being inspired.. Thanks! And it means a lot to me to see you in my playground 😉
And I thank you for the insperment (see now I’m making up words)! Plus, I love being in your playground! Your poems are darkly tantalizing and utterly robust with emotion everything I love in poetry!
And your comments make me smile and wanting to improve myself!
wow
🙂 thanks
try? impossible
this is ridiculously good
Nothing is impossible, dear..
Does that mean I need to?
Wonderful as always
Awww thanks! All is well with you?
Like a prostitutes knickers…up & down
At least its up once in a while.. 😦
How’s everything with you?
Taking one day at a time..
You should email me more…
I should, right? *sighs*
Check your email 🙂
It´s very picturesque poem!
Was trying to make it quite visual ;);)
Yes.. this is amazing.
Thanks once again..