Three lose buttons on my shirt
and you chose the one
that’s so difficult to fiddle with,
leaving you frustrated
and me annoyed,
but us both –
breathless.
Your eyes were screaming
words that start with “L”,
while I was counting
passing cars and
begging you
to keep your sentences
inside your
mouth,
so I could swallow
vowels of your words
(the ones that you arrange
so neatly in-between
your fingers)
and make new sounds
that rhyme with
moans
you cannot make.
I hate to say this,
but
I miss you.
– Chatty Owl –
CHATTYOWL 
Deliciously delightful
Your poems are so compressed, condensed, though so far reaching. It’s like little balls of tar on spiderweb
That is such a brilliant comparison, my dear. Even I wouldn’t have thought of it. Thank you. I would prefer to spread out dew, but I have none 🙂
Breathless…
Isnt that the best state?
Yes…unless it’s that bike ride 😀
Remarkably pure…
Thats how I felt..
You are so good, you should be published! I try to figure out your formula, but ends up with one word:”credibility”! I haven’t read all your posts yet, but I think it would be interesting to read something where you exploring a foreign territory, somewhere where youre not safe, traveling on a dangerous and adventures path or dropped down in a completely different world.
Love!
Once again – flattered by your compliments and opinion about my works. Sometimes I feel like others have more faith in me than I do myself!!! Thanks once again.
Well thats how I feel when you flattering me…
wow! another poetry expressed in the usage of smart words and filled with honest emotion! 🙂 I’ve enjoyed reading it over and over 🙂
Wow! So flattered that you think so! Thanks so much!