Like evolving species,
my thoughts progress to only one thing –
you.
Softness of my skin
meets roughness of your words
and we make the perfect combination
of lust.
Nothing is staged,
it’s not a movie,
bodies aren’t perfect,
when they form bedroom figures of eight,
divided in two –
a male and a female –
making a four – well, me on mine.
Knees hold the weight
of years yearning
to feel something more than plain
boredom.
The urge of the body
is the process of the mind –
constantly evolving.
– Chatty Owl –
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Beautiful 🙂
Glad you thought so.
Oh, Owly, another good one, full of romanticism and lust. Your words are beautiful, as you.
My notifications are hiding some of the comments… grrr. I don’t like that. Thanks, darling. You always say the most beautiful compliments.
Oh Little Owl – good at maths are we ?
Dont be sarcastic, mister 🙂
I suppose I should have said, A fine mind is much to be desired 🙂
That, actually, is a beautiful truth.
exploring the body – passion,
exploring the mind – love
Beautiful as ever. Thanks for the maths lesson.
He he. Seriously, the sarcasm is too obvious now 😛
Thanks for not forgetting my blog, dear.
Lustful, romantic, engaging and educational. 😀
Thanks dear. Nice to see you around my playground again.
I try to make it by as much as I can! I love your poetry, Chatty!
What a superb poem! So many quotable lines to choose from here, Ms Owl 🙂
You know me, i cant get my head out of the bedroom department.. Lol
Ms Owl,
A “Lover” of course you are! I can read all kinds of Freud into you only because I learned from reading into myself. Such mental agility is yours.
You are super attractive and I must inform you, like I do with my many beautiful nieces, there is a perfect person in the world for you! In fact that person is looking for you right now! When that person finds you, you will feel so lucky! You will keep pinching yourself to make sure it’s not a dream. You’ll ask yourself, Why me? He could have anyone! But you will know you are his passion and his true desire. These things can’t be faked. And guess what? Your happiness will reach heights you’ve only read about and hoped for and now finally realized. Yes indeed he is looking right now for you and will find you. Maybe not today or tomorrow but he will…no doubt!
I am sure I am your biggest fan to date…..claudy.
Damn, where do i start with you? First of all, thanks for coming over here with your lengthy and ballsy comments 😛 i just think im coming across to you in a completely different light that im attempting to show myself here!! Do you really think of me as some meek low-self-esteem birdie? I hope not! Im constantly battling with arrogance in my daily attitude, haha. I need to tame myself down before i explode from blowing my own ass haha 😛 anyhow. Thanks. You made me giggle this morning.
Owl,
I Love You! I really really do! You are giftedly brilliant. See I made up a word to describe. You are unusually smart and gorgeous. I can see that behind the arm. But really that doesn’t matter..the physical because it’s that mind that is sooo! That is how I know such wonder and delight awaits in your future. Low esteem? Join the club! I do not feel special because of my own low esteem. It’s part of who I am.
When you said, “I’m not looking for a husband.” Everyone is! That is human. All single woman and all single men for the most part are looking to connect. The word husband means a life commitment. I like that you used that word!
Ultimately your words are provocative and move people emotionally. Even upsetting some like they have never been upset before. Wow! What power in just words you have! That is a gift my dear! Lucky you!
You may incorrectly think I consider you less in some aspect in fact I understand how much more you are. I do! It is all pleasure for me to witness such young youthful talent and contemplate your the growth. Thank you for being you….claudy
Your mind is always evolving so beautifully.
In its own weird way 😀
Weird is good. Otherwise it would be boring. Can’t have that now can we? 😛
No way! 😀 x
Evolution has never seemed so sexy, take that Darwin and your beard.
Exactly. His beard…. Not a fan.
Beards are great…by which I mean I have a beard…I am not a Darwin fancier for as he will tell you that is not the way to evolve…
Well, you certainly dont look like father christmas!
Best one yet!
You really thought that? Thanks!
Yep – the pacing and structure did the marvellous content proud. Just worked on every angle for me
Thanks. Means a lot coming from a ginger jesus *thumbs up*
Amen!
another sizzler from you ~ but expected and appreciated – liked the title you chose too 🙂 Scrummy piece lovely x
Ha 🙂 thanks dear! Well, i was in sizzler mood!
hot! sweet! hot, sweet, hot!! yea, that about sums it up.
Ha ha! Thanks! Hot is good 🙂
hot is always good!!
This could apply to making pretzels as well. Not as interesting though.
But pretzels are way more delicious.
Says you.
Great poem Chatty, I loved your take and wisdom that you shared with us!
Thanks girl!
It always requires a few readings and at least a day of contemplation before I’m completely with you on your poems. That’s a compliment, by the way.
And i will take it as a beautiful compliment that it was. Im glad to linger in your mind for a few days..
“84” as “1984”?
As the book with the same name or the birth year of “him”?
Nice poem. (;
84 as in total coincidence over here 🙂 sorry 🙂
Sexy. Haunting and pure magic~ love it!
Thanks sweets!
Wow, stunning. I really like the emotions in this… that’s one of my biggest fears is to be boring to a woman. I can just imagine it now, you falling asleep reading this comment, lol. Smile! 🙂
You know, women are bored of completely different things than men assume, i think. But i doubt you are boring any of them! We both know that you are a bunch of fun!!
Mind evolution
Body revolution
Urging of lust
Imperfect tryst
Reality clash
Relationship smash
What a sharp and beautiful response. Im impressed!
Thanks 🙂 great poetry inspires me!
I’m still puzzling over my own meaning for the last 3 lines. “The urge of the body; is the process of the mind –
constantly evolving.”
Maybe it’s due to the pace of my own evolution – I don’t notice the subtle changes, leaving me frequently frustrated over the apparent lack of progress.
The process can certainly be slow, but its visible still, right? Think of yourself years ago, dont you think your urges and wishes and lusts changed?
Sadly today, thinking back, it would appear not.
But then, today, is not a good day.
Certainly imperfect-but that’s where the fun starts.
Beautifully written words Miss Owl.
Sharing imperfect is what makes things perfect and worthy..
I like your theory of evolution
Sometimes my mind works in weird ways..
with no humility in sight, I will suggest it’s why we poets are such magnificent creatures
Are we? Sometimes i wonder if we are not the insanity of the human race.
I always love your endings. This one especially. Perfect owlybutt!
Thanks!!
OMG! This is too romantic. ❤ \m/
– Rahul
Thanks so much. Means a lot to see you stopping by!