Your tongue
seeks revenge in my mouth
for what my hands have done
to your back,
when it was held straight
and mine was arched
for you.
My murmur
got stopped
by your pressure on my wrists
as I wiggled my way
under your
sheets,
when you wanted it to be
your life
instead.
(It was in a way though, no?)
You say your heart is weak,
because cracks of the past
can’t stop
those red-coloured liquids
escaping,
and in response
I just give you
my weak knees,
that are failing my body
on your bedroom floor,
and all the colour
is being drained
from my fingers,
that are now turning blue
as you kiss my
not-so-red-anymore
lips.
The end was not
what you expected.
– Chatty Owl –


Ends, which the exception of death, are rarely as expected… Which, by now, everyone should expect… Else, they haven’t lived, or learned … Words well imagined…
Well… Yeah, ok 🙂 wanted to argue for a minute, but i guess you are right. As always! 🙂
If you say so… In this case, I am reflecting on my actual learnings… No guessing required… As I do enjoy thinking, I can’t help but wonder what was your trigger for first wanting to argue… Hmm
Once again the Reader is mocking me and trying to hide great poems from me, but I am once again victourious. Lovely image weaving here, you ahve a way with words which makes them so sweet,yet so sharp at same time.
Trust me, reader is getting on my nerves too. So bleeding much! But thanks for chasing me up and catching up with my writings!
real art
~
never anticipated
expected
Captivating!
Thanks!
Metaphorically perfect
*bows*
Thank you.
I’ve said it before, but I really mean it: this was brilliant.
Thank you so much. Really. Its an honour to be praised by you.
Thanks for visiting Jacks Poems. I must get around to updating it soon! Meanwhile you can find me at http://bythewobblydumdumtree.wordpress.com.
Will roam around your blog!
Hold steady your bow…aim…another arrow through the heart. That’s the impact of your poetry. Outstanding, Owl 😉
Bam! Whack! Arrow right there 😉 haha, your comment made me laugh. Thanks dear.
🙂
a sensuous death indeed
I wish to die like that.
I enjoyed reading this poem!
Thanks 🙂 wonder which part you liked the most? I need to head to your blog to catch up.
Brilliant U like always!
Oh dear, thanks a lot!
You’re welcome U 🙂
Wow, the beginning lines capture attention quickly.
Im happy 🙂 the fact that you really liked this makes me smile 🙂
Awesome ending Chatty – oh wow — fantastic write. You have a gift dear friend! x RL
Robyn, you are way too kind to me. Thank you for being such a great support!
Greetings My Friend,
I have nominated you for The Very Inspirational Blogger Award… Thank You for all you have done for me… 🙂
http://manbehindthesteelmask.wordpress.com/2013/05/29/a-big-thank-you/
Oh dear, thank you so much for this. Im flattered you would think about me.
I think about you often my friend… I look forward to our next collaboration… 🙂
Same here.. 🙂
“You say your heart is weak,
because cracks of the past
can’t stop
those red-coloured liquids
escaping,”
Love this.
Thank you. It means so much to see that people enjoy my tangled words 🙂
I Admire your artistic writings. Your truly an Articulate, Powerful Poet.
Thank you for sharing your talent with me.
Thank you for being so kind…
I beg for more…
Patience…
Im in love with the lust in your words….or maybe other way around… might be that i’m turned on by the love in them… This.Is.Beautiful.
If that’s the effect my poetry gives, im very happy. And smiling big that you enjoy the poetry lust i express here 🙂
Im glad i made u smile..:-) and yes.. thats the effect your poetry gives.. the lovelust is beautiful..
🙂
That I liked much – said my inner dirty Yoda 😀
Dirty Yoda – oh my, you know how to make me smile! Thanks.
I have my moments 😉
Im sure you do 🙂
whoa. I gotta love your words. They are killers arranged the way you do them.
I like toying with words by lining them up in a row and then making them dance 🙂
Or shoot
Ha ha! You made me laugh.
personally can’t relate, nevertheless very well expressed !
I tried 🙂
This was brilliant, truly.
B.
Glad you thought so. Thank you so much.
Love. And a perfect photo companion ❤
*bows* thank you
*round of applaus* 😉
Encore 🙂