I fall asleep
to the sound of the clock,
that stopped weeks ago,
but I like hearing things
that are not present for days now.
I drift away
into a sleepless dream about you
and our dreamless sleepovers
together,
where the tone of your voice
is the perfect alarm
in the never-coming morning.
We fall asleep
to my body belonging to yours
and
we never say a word,
when it’s time to leave,
because I hate asking questions
and
you’ve already asked yours.
– Chatty Owl –

Great honest line: but I like hearing things
that are not present for days now.
… But I don’t understand why you tag this and your other writings as “daily nonsense”. Far from it…
Beautiful. I particularly like the first stanza.
Thank you 😉
This is so calm and gentle…a remembrance of things that had been so intimate.
“but I like hearing things
that are not present for days now.”
Beautifully written, as always, :).
Thank you. Sometimes I get angry that my writings dont come out the way i want, but then you and others compliment anyway and i smile 🙂
Whenever i read an intriguing poem i am always left wondering…. is it autobiographical, total fiction, or somewhere between the two?
For my 2c… picture next time please! 😛
I’d say somewhere in between two, but still more on a fiction side 😉
Exquisite poem ,jalal
Dear Owl lover….I do hope you will accept a versatile blogger award from me…amended rules – 7 things about yourself and 10 nominations of others….http://writingthebody.wordpress.com/
‘the tone of your voice
is the perfect alarm’
i have to agree…and i will patiently wait for my alarm to ring once again and wake me from a fitful sleep
Satisfying moments, such as these, are filled with answers to questions never asked …
I want you to know I’m utterly in love with your slick tongue 😀
you have a great talent 🙂
the tone of your voice
is the perfect alarm
~
Lovely ♥
Awww thanks for liking it!
Amazing, as always 🙂
I like it a lot. I liked the ending very much!
Thanks! Was meaning to add a picture too, but then remembered your advice! 😉
HAHAHAHAHAHA!
You do what you wanna do. Don´t mind anyone — especially me!
Hahaha
Exactly: hahaha!
Well, even though we write for ourselves, we still appreciate the feedback and take it on board, right? 🙂
Right!
Don’t listen to him!
Ha ha, why? 🙂