Not you.
I spill.
The drink.
Across the table.
Wet.
Like me.
Not you.
You curse.
Not me.
I smile.
It’s wet.
Me, not you.
You want it.
Wetter.
Me. Not you.
It’s you.
And me.
– Chatty Owl –
"Owls are not what they seem"
"Owls are not what they seem"
Not you.
I spill.
The drink.
Across the table.
Wet.
Like me.
Not you.
You curse.
Not me.
I smile.
It’s wet.
Me, not you.
You want it.
Wetter.
Me. Not you.
It’s you.
And me.
– Chatty Owl –
Another staccato type poem. You’re good at these.
I never write these. That was just an attempt. Thanks though!
Very sensual…Very Cat and mouse…Very wanting, :).
Craving. Wanting. Yes 🙂
Very very good!
You said you didn´t publish, but you must to!
It´s really good! Maybe it won´t be the bestseller but sure is gonna be your path for really good recognition in the world! (Sorry for posibble bad English!)
Actually Im on close plans to publish… So thanks for encouraging!
Go for it!
Thanks mister! Sorry for being late with my replies, was away from wordpress a little, so in need to catch up with everybody properly! Hope your week is going great so far!
I actually adore this! You are an exceptionally talented writer!
Awww thats such a sweet thing to say! Thanks, dear!
I wish I could understand poems so easily as you create them…
I’ll take that as a compliment 😉
Words playing… I feel like a game of tag… Fun post
Tag and cat and mouse into one 🙂
lovely 🙂
Thanks doll! Not as exciting as your weekend though, ha ha!
Love it.
Thanks dear!
Ohhhh I get it. Had to reread. Hahaha.
Ha ha! Glad you did!
Yum! Love how it builds.
Sensual…powerful…swoon
Thanks dear! Always makes me smile when you enjoy what I write!