We ignored cats eyes
as we drove through drying-out puddles,
and into a fabric of a peachy night.
My toes on the dashboard
and too-fast beating hearts
were only few pieces of this short story.
Your tongue
turned into a thief of my kisses,
and in return,
I gave you my mouth
as a finger-sucking monster.
Hipbones, pressed hard against the leather.
Shadows, flickering on our faces,
in the light of passing cars.
They stopped for a second to watch us,
just like our heartbeats did,
every time my neck got bitten
by you.
We woke up in separate beds,
but we both knew, it isn’t an illusion
of how good our love is,
when mixed together.
I burn your oxygen, while you replace mine –
a constant stream of perfect love drops.
My shyness was paper-white and angelic,
until you spoiled it.
Like a hunter spoils feathers of the swan,
marking them red.
With a bullet.
– Chatty Owl –
It has been 4 years since I joined WordPress. It has been such a blast. I’m honoured to have met all of you. Thanks for staying so awesome!
CHATTYOWL 
I’m sure they’ve flown by. Very evocative poem.
So glad you have found this, it’s one of my favourites. I think time goes by too fast in general.
what a long, strange trip it’s been!
Love love love it!
Intelligent. Evocative. Passion. Mission Accomplished. Every Time.
Sigh. Thanks.
Hoping that’s a good sigh!
Full of passion as ever – beautifully done Ms Owl! Congrates on 4yrs! Cheers J
Thanks dear!
A honor to have met you. You are a kind and beautiful woman. Thank you for your words and reading my words.
Thank you back. It means a lot to me to read your words.
And the door was closed……….
Sigh..
Passion in it’s most impulsive form. Love it.
Great word imagery! Glad you are back.
Wonderful. What a way to commemorate your 4th year mark. I’m happy to be along for the ride.
Beautiful words of intimacy and congrats on your 4 years, too! I’m happy to have stumbled upon your amazing writing!
Im happy we are connected! Your writing is ever so inspiring!
This is a work of sensual art. I love it. I once had a lover who taught me what intimacy is because I would never give all of myself completely. He said, “Darling, you must give of yourself because intimacy is “into me you see.” I’ve never forgotten that. You bring joy into my heart with your posts. Thank you!
Two parts as the best of a good thing,
“Your tongue
turned into a thief of my kisses,
and in return,
I gave you my mouth
as a finger-socking monster.”
Did you mean sucking?
Shadows, flickering on our faces,
in the light of passing cars.
They stopped for a second to watch us,
just like our heartbeats did,
every time my neck got bitten
by you.
So emotive this section, brilliant all round.
Jim
First of all, big smiles to see you stop by and taking your time to read my drivel. Brings joy to my heart.
Thanks so much for noticing the typo!!!!! Yes, so-su 🙂
Im grateful for your comment. Honoured.
“but we both knew, it isn’t an illusion of how good our love is when mixed together.” Aint it the truth?.. Mixing is so necessary. Congratulations on the 4th. 🙂
Thanks.. 4 sounds a lot and little at the same time. But yes, mixing is needed. Like two wheels on a bike.
4 is too little for your brilliance and too much for everyone else to look at this number. I’m sure if you stab your heart and start bleeding the words, it would go on and on and on. I’m so glad to be around these sprinkles of yours. 🙂
That is such a beautiful praise and kind words from you, dear. Thank you. I’ll get my heart stabbed. Would definitely do the trick for more words..
Mention not Sweetheart. More words mean would more pleasure 🙂
Speechless ~ your words a seductive silloquy to your lover (and us) and WHOOP! on the 4 years ~ thank you for sharing yourself with us. ❤ x
Thanks girl! 4 and hopefully more to come. Also thanks for liking my seductive innuendo, i was trying to mirror my delusional thoughts 🙂
Pfft, I like everything you have written so far…delusional you say … Never 😉 x
Haha, flattery, girl!
Truth 🙂
happy 4th and here’s to as many more as you would like to have
Thanks Paul. Ever so kind.
Lovely poem. And classy. You bring me joy with these poetic perls.
Thank you.. 🙂
Years do pass so fast sometimes, congrats and beautifully written, touching.
Sup Chatty!
Sup mister! All good in the land of Watt?
the best of things are improved over time 🙂
Some things cant be improved, but we all try to anyway!
Perhaps they become more precious
Very good point!
wow – incredible.
Thanks girl! All smiles that you enjoyed it.
And now shy no more. Beautiful (as always) Congrats on the four year mark.
It takes so much fun away from life, when one is shy. And thanks! 🙂
Yes. That is all
Brief 👍
Yet effective!
Thank you for sharing your awesomeness with us and congrats on the 4 year mark! That’s awesome! 😀
And quite the poem there. 🙂
Thanks B! 4 years went by really fast. And I havent achieved anything, haha. Thanks for staying fun!
You have though… you’re friends with me! 😀 And you have touched the lives of many others. 🙂
Haha! True! Stay awesome, B!!!