I leave my pretend reality
on the pillow
every morning,
together with imprints of dreams
that I don’t remember,
once I open my eyes.
Inverted minutes of darkness
become illuminating rays
of present light –
You.
"Owls are not what they seem"
"Owls are not what they seem"
I leave my pretend reality
on the pillow
every morning,
together with imprints of dreams
that I don’t remember,
once I open my eyes.
Inverted minutes of darkness
become illuminating rays
of present light –
You.
Powerful, very much so. Great write. 🙂
Thank you, dear.
Thanks so much.
Reblogged this on Geo Sans and commented:
a poetic confidant … NaPoWriMo
Your creative ability amazes me. You release a book full of your works, you a number of pieces posted here and you continue creating!
Ha. Mister, you are kind as always. I don’t think talent is the correct word, but I’m not complaining 😉
ha, what’s the correct word then mistress?
Wow……
“That was why, he said, the moment of waking up was the riskiest moment of the day. Once that was well over without deflecting you from your orbit, you could take heart of grace for the rest of the day.” Kafka
A quote worth saving!
It definitely stuck in my mind, and your poem brought it right to the surface!
Now i hope it’ll get stuck in mine 🙂
Fly me away, Ms Owl…loved it 🙂
J, you are always full of compliments 😉 owl is winking back!
Very lovely 🙂
Thanks dear 🙂 i hardly ever get inspired lately, but im working on it!
You sound like a little girl.. a first love charm! BEAUTIFUL Chatty~ Faithfully Debbie
Thanks D! Its a but unusual for me to write like this I think, so im glad it left a pleasant feeling for you!
Hope you’re ok?
That was pure delight to read… I took in every word 🙂
You did? Then im delighted. Sorry i havent been around your blog lately, damn that lack of time!
No worries my friend… I completely understand 🙂
this has a delightfully delicate touch
Thanks Paul. It hardly ever happens to me, my poetry is rarely ever delicate, so im delighted when i succeed 🙂
Sigh… so beautiful.
Thanks my far away friend… Im stunned by the latest picture on your blog!
What every other person said and more. Stunning words owly ❤
Thanks birdie 🙂
This is a beautiful piece of writing.
Thank you. I thought it was too simple, but then again, beauty is in simple things.
That’s quite a compliment to him.
You think so? 🙂
scrumptious and delicious, simple yet so much, this is lovely Ms Owl – thank you x
I was dreaming with You, happy,
between whispers and hugs,
falling into a deep blue ocean,
free of concerns, warm, quiet,
at this moment all came true,
all was magical and ethereal.
Please don’t wake me up!
Very nice transition from the dream state and awareness of the present light. Made me smile.
Beautiful… this is a lovely piece!
I like the positive ending. A amazing poem.
this is outstanding – clever, romantic, lovely, wonderful choice of words.
Aww…just lovely and “sigh” worthy, lovely lady!
Lauren
“together with imprints of dreams that I don’t remember” what a gorgeous line, I can’t get it out my head and I’m a bit jealous I didn’t write it haha!
You always have such a wonderful way with words dear! 😊
Owly is back with a bang. Love you! ❤
Wow, owly, that is a tremendous poem. Loved it.