I remember every single detail
about you.
Those visions
float anxiously in the air
– like white prickly bees –
they sting,
but refuse to die,
creating a sad winter
inside me.
I don’t want to wake up.
– Chatty Owl –
"Owls are not what they seem"
The moon? Seems too simple a scapegoat..
Someone has to be..
lovely – sad, but lovely.
Thank you dearly.
one of my favourite songs
Thanks!
and on a holiday no less! There is a moment each morning that I seriously consider not getting up out of bed, then I remember that I have something to look forward to and I arise happy!
That’s a brilliant attitude! Good you have things to look forward to! 🙂
Indeed I do,one thing at least and I pray that I always have it for as long as I possibly can 😉
A sad little poem; as usual, very well done. Sending you big, warm hugs 🙂
Catching all the hugs 🙂
Beautifully written (again). I always thought owls loved the full moon. 🙂
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Love it. Especially the last line
Full moon and rain misery. Let’s join the club 🙂
Exquisite pain bears the sweetest fruits too friend ~ but,, nonetheless it hurts terribly !
So it seems! (I blame it on full moon)
Short but exquisite in form – another gorgeous poem.
Refusing the sting, embrace the white assassins, and indulge in their golden goodness. Excellent work, Chatty Owl…..as usual.
Mmm, thats such a beautiful advice. I will do so. Thank you for stopping by at my playground.
Truly, I’m honored to witness your words, at your playground.
It’s that bloody moon, I’m telling ya! I’m still trying to get my shit together….
It is!!!! See, bloody shining thing in the sky *grumpy owl*
almost russian in its feel – like Zhivago’s Lara
I love the comparison! Thanks!
Beautiful as always owly
Thanks birdie.
Such poignant words…
Thank you, dear.
Do not scowl beautiful owl 😦
I wont :*
Maybye it is not bees but wasps? They can sting more than once…
Wasps are awful! I hope it was bees 🙂
Sad…
Really sad poem!
Thanks E. I was in a very melancholy mood..
Why? Don´t be!
Maybe just maybe you’ll wake to a new dawn.
I think i did. Today i feel much much better!
Excellent good morning to you
What happened ?
Meh. Moon i think.
Another post that makes me want to turn around to see if there is someone behind me to whom you are talking. No one there. “Excuse me are you talking to me?” Great Job as usual.
🙂 that’s exactly the response i was hoping for. Thank you for being so awesome.
I loved your title! But I am sad when a Blue Monday strikes someone and I hope you feel better soon!
I liked your image of white prickly bees, it sounds very original and imaginitive and aswell portrays very well the feeling of impending pain.
Thank you. Means a lot coming from you, your visuals are always so descriptive and unique!
I wouldn’t want to wake up either if bees were waiting to sting me! Don’t be blue! Be green instead! (I joke, lol). I do know what blue Monday’s are like though. Excellent poem Chatty. 🙂
Ha! You make me smile indeed! Let’s be green instead 🙂